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25 April 2013 @ 01:57 am

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Title: Better
Author:

later2nite
Pairing: Brian and Justin
Timeline: 511
A/N: Written for the Evil Kinney Girls
birthday project for

pam81.
(Hope you had a fabulous day!)

You've given him a shitload of things in the past five years, resistance, stubbornness, and difficulty coming to mind most readily.

And don't forget disappointment. You've disappointed him more times than you can count, now that you think about it.

You want to tell him he deserves so much better, but you offer your hand in marriage instead, a lifetime ahead of you to be better.

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You've been a brat, a shit, a pest, and a twat. You've caused him trouble, worried him to death, and hurt him beyond repair.

You should thank him, now that you think about it. For saving your life. For taking you in. For waiting while you grew up.

You want to tell him he deserves so much better, but you take his hand and accept his offer instead, a lifetime ahead of you to be better.

THE END

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guavejuice on April 25th, 2013 10:21 am (UTC)

omg, Linda it's totally perfect. A true brilliant gem. I knew you would pull it off eventually (just like our boyz...)
*hus*
V.

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later2nite on April 27th, 2013 11:00 pm (UTC)

Thanks! I finally thought of this. Glad you liked it. ♥

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shadownyc on April 25th, 2013 11:19 am (UTC)

Beautiful, thoughtful moment for B/J!

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later2nite on April 27th, 2013 11:01 pm (UTC)

Thank you for the sweet comment. ♥

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7wildwaysup on April 25th, 2013 02:03 pm (UTC)

It will definitely be better now that their back together... Loved it ~ Kathleen

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later2nite on April 27th, 2013 11:02 pm (UTC)

Thank you for this nice feedback. Glad you loved it. ♥

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techgirl_on_ij on April 25th, 2013 02:18 pm (UTC)

Beautiful!

I love that they both can see how it's been and that it will be better in the future.

♥

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later2nite on April 27th, 2013 11:04 pm (UTC)

Thank you for this sweet comment. Glad you liked it! ♥

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thespian15 on April 25th, 2013 02:37 pm (UTC)

Very nice.
The bond goes beyond the pains. :)
Hugs, Jon

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later2nite on April 27th, 2013 11:05 pm (UTC)

Thanks for this great feedback. Glad you liked it. ♥

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soulmatejunkee on April 25th, 2013 02:50 pm (UTC)

Nobody's perfect ... and true love is everlasting ♥
Very beautiful written.

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later2nite on April 27th, 2013 11:08 pm (UTC)

Thank you for this great comment. And you're sooo right - nobody's perfect. But they love each other and want to try to be better for the other one. That's what true love is. ♥

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sfscarlet on April 25th, 2013 04:42 pm (UTC)

your ability to share a thought in such a short space never ceases to amaze me, great job

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later2nite on April 27th, 2013 11:09 pm (UTC)

Thank you so much. What a sweet thing to say ... means the world to me. ♥

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rainbow1907 on April 25th, 2013 05:39 pm (UTC)

That's really awesome, Linda! I love it :) Hugs you, Rena

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later2nite on April 27th, 2013 11:10 pm (UTC)

Thank you so much for the kind comment. Glad you loved it. ♥

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kmacorina on April 26th, 2013 12:37 am (UTC)

Love it!!!

Kisses

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later2nite on April 27th, 2013 11:11 pm (UTC)

Thank you so much! ♥

*kisses back*

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urugwaj on April 26th, 2013 10:49 am (UTC)

Oh, this is beautiful! Fooled me the same banner which do you use - I thought I already read it. How good it is that I looked at closely, the author is another. It is really beautiful!

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later2nite on April 27th, 2013 11:15 pm (UTC)

Thank you for thinking it's beautiful - that means the world to me.

The same banner is used by all of us Evil Kinney Girls when we do a birthday or holiday project. (It's easy to think you already read it.)

But I'm happy that you read it and saw that it was written by me! ♥

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pam81 on April 26th, 2013 03:37 pm (UTC)

Just one word: PERFECT ♥

Thank you so much for writing this for me, my friend!
I love it ♥ So much!

*hugs*

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later2nite on April 27th, 2013 11:17 pm (UTC)

Hi, Birthday Girl! (a few day ago! LOL)

Hope you had a really great special day.

Thank you so much for the beautiful comment about this little ficlet. Glad you enjoyed it. ♥

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