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05 March 2012 @ 09:39 am
LETTING GO -- B/J double drabble  
letting go.jpg



Title: Letting Go
Author: later2nite
Word Count: 200 - Double Drabble
A/N: Written for the prompt 'Weddings and Funerals' at QAF Drabbles on Insane Journal
A/N 2: You've got to use your imagination with this pic.
Think of it as age-enhanced to the point of Justin being 60 years old and Brian 72.



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piksa: brian_justin_starepiksa on August 10th, 2012 07:40 pm (UTC)
What a lovely drabble. For a while it made me wonder whose funeral it was. Had a few choices. However, the last few lines made it quite clear. So great to see the boys still together and getting some closure.
later2nite: promolater2nite on August 10th, 2012 08:23 pm (UTC)
Thank you for this nice feedback. ♥ Happy you enjoyed it.

Yeah, I thought it was time for the boys (even if they may be senior citizens now LOL) to close this painful chapter of their lives. They deserve it.
shenova: Babylonshenova on August 10th, 2012 11:22 pm (UTC)
Brian always there to support Justin in whatever he needs. Byer bye Hobbs. Nice to see the guys old and together.
later2nite: promolater2nite on August 10th, 2012 11:32 pm (UTC)
Yep - Bye bye, Hobbs. He's history!

I love to think of Brian and Justin together in their senior years, always supporting each other.



Edited at 2012-08-10 11:33 pm (UTC)
Daphne: chromeskiesduffy_60 on August 11th, 2012 01:41 am (UTC)
I was confused at first whose funeral they were attending, but then the lightbulb went off in the second part of the drabble. Very well done, sweetie!
later2nite: promolater2nite on August 11th, 2012 02:04 am (UTC)
Yeah, it becomes clear in the 2nd half who it is. Thank you for this kind comment. Glad you liked it. ♥
emac66emac66 on August 11th, 2012 02:09 am (UTC)
.........wow.......i mean.....wow. That was amazingly poignant.
later2nite: promolater2nite on August 11th, 2012 02:57 am (UTC)
This comment means so much to me. Thank you for that. ♥
toshiani007 on August 11th, 2012 02:54 am (UTC)
It was beautiful, loved it!!!
Hugs!!!
later2nite: promolater2nite on August 11th, 2012 03:00 am (UTC)
Hi, Ani! Thank you so much for this beautiful feedback.

*Hugs* ♥
balrogtweetybalrogtweety on August 11th, 2012 04:25 am (UTC)
This was beautiful and sad. Great work.
later2nite: promolater2nite on August 11th, 2012 04:52 am (UTC)
Thank you. I agree it was sad. They didn't deserve to have to deal with that pain. I just wanted to bring it to an end, finally.

Lindals1966 on August 11th, 2012 06:07 am (UTC)
Beautiful and intens, love it ;-)
later2nite: promolater2nite on August 11th, 2012 06:54 am (UTC)
Thank you, Linda. Your comment means so much to me. I'm glad you liked it.

bksbraceletbksbracelet on August 11th, 2012 07:42 am (UTC)
Beautiful fic, I bet Brian is a whinging queen about his aging knees lol
later2nite: promolater2nite on August 11th, 2012 08:26 am (UTC)
Oh, I'm sure he doesn't like it one little bit that his knees aren't 29 any longer. LOL

Thanks for this nice feedback. ♥
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later2nite: promolater2nite on August 11th, 2012 10:52 pm (UTC)
Yeah, I agree it's sad. But I'm happy you thought it was wonderful also. Thanks for this kind comment. ♥
cheburashka_2cheburashka_2 on August 11th, 2012 01:21 pm (UTC)
Sad and lovely.

Cheers,
Vin
later2nite: promolater2nite on August 11th, 2012 10:54 pm (UTC)
I agree it's sad, but I'm happy you thought it was lovely. Thanks for this kind comment.

See you soon! ♥
Mariongalenut on August 11th, 2012 08:07 pm (UTC)
This was very moving.
later2nite: promolater2nite on August 11th, 2012 10:50 pm (UTC)
Thank you. I'm glad you read it and liked it. ♥
ariadne_mitosariadne_mitos on August 12th, 2012 03:43 am (UTC)
I liked so much the small gestures of companionship and partnership between B/J.

"I'm glad I can't remember," he utters softly into his ear.
"I still can't forget."

Wow, so sad.

Justin finally getting closure :)
Beautiful!
later2nite: promolater2nite on August 12th, 2012 04:11 am (UTC)
Thank you so very much for this beautiful comment. It means so much to me. I'm happy that you read it and liked it. ♥
mander3_swishmander3_swish on August 12th, 2012 04:46 am (UTC)
Superb
later2nite: promolater2nite on August 12th, 2012 06:24 am (UTC)
Thanks, mander. Glad you liked it.

Hugs ♥
Set your mind at rest and let your dreams run free: Justin tonguemoonbrightnites on August 15th, 2012 12:25 am (UTC)
Sorry I'm late!
This was really lovely. Sad, but lovely,
Nicely done, as always.


Michelle
later2nite: promolater2nite on August 15th, 2012 01:25 am (UTC)
Thank you, Michelle. I agree - very sad. But at least Brian and Justin survived the tragic incident.

Hugs ♥
Hike: Brian&Justinhikinggirl70 on June 22nd, 2014 01:19 am (UTC)
Wow so emotional even though Justin still can't remember what happened that night. Brian is still his rock to hold on to.
later2nite: promolater2nite on July 3rd, 2014 08:50 pm (UTC)
Yeah, I like this drabble the best of all the ones I've written. Very emotional, but Brian will be there for Justin for all eternity. Thanks for this lovely comment. ♥